- Apr 2, 2020
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Lurker here. Popping my head out and to make my own comment and shit about this chaotic mess.That was only the prologue. The dev had a ambitious vision of having up to 5 chapters in the same length or bigger than the prologue.
He kinda lost motivation midway through the prologue though and were already cutting corners here and there.
His last statement is that he will continue the series if the prologue pays well but this is kinda a roundabout way of saying that he wont.
The thing is what does he deems as "payed well" xD
So yeah dont expect much.
So to my understanding. He gave up and cut content and corners like hell. He didn't have a certain setting, rather a vision, than an actual goal.
If he had certain theme, then i'd be something. There was a mix of NTR, Transformation, Monster Sex/Rape, certain "Choices" that gave you CGs, but not consequences. The content is literally everywhere, in terms of Fetishes, Themes and so on. Like at the very start, the horny as fuck Chieftess elf woman gets taken by Werewolf and you have a choice to watch it as the MC, weirdly enough. Rather than the consequence of MC being too late to find her and save her, she ends up pregnant (doesn't bang the MC afterwards) and the MC doesn't find the Werewolf and has to leave at some point to journey the World more and do his Ultimate Mission, but Werewolf bangs the rest of the Village as he's away. That's just one thing he could've done, and fits with the setting. You can also do this on purpose, but it seems like he wanted some kind of feelings and emotions for the MC, to feel powerless in a corrupt, scary and incredibly difficult World that is completely stacked against him and his odds.
It is also kind of stupid of him to have some kind of weird sperm that kills other sperm, or already fertilized eggs. I know this is a fantasy World. But hellish shit that's a bit far fetched and overpowered. Give him the choice to use his Mana to turn it into Holy Power, into his Sperm, and do that thing instead.
The MC shouldn't be weirdly powerful and then just weak. Rather, he can use Divine Power only so often, gifted by the Angel to save individuals and do heroic deeds. But it is limited and eats his Mana nearly instantly.
It is supposed to be a dark world, to some degree, where you cannot save everyone and everything. Your ultimate goal is to find and to defeat the one/s corrupting everything, and if MC cannot do that, it'll be a very raunchy and debauched world...including the Angels. Or let it happen on purpose and see the MC fall into depression and hopelessness and no one eventually cares, too busy fucking and breeding.
But i suppose if BlueBone can't use half the portion of his visionary brain, i doubt any of the future content will be impressive. This was a hidden gem. But i honestly see very little potential anymore in it, seeing as how twisted and abandoned it feels. I have now rewritten (kind of) it in a way that sounds a whole lot more interesting, at least in my brain. Like it or not.
Oh well. Visionaries will also be full of air but nothing else. I'm not very interested in whatever he will create in future, seeing as he has already fucked this up and nearly abandoned it. Peace, fellow horndogs!